Review: Bellwalker

Canadian Poetry Association 2006 Poetry Competition 1st PLACE:


war musket grasses (Bay of Fundy)

I see no soldier’s uniform as I walk along these shores

but fresh blood cliffs, musket grasses,

and a labyrinth of our relics,

the unfolding of this puzzle to figure out broader picture,

as rose clashed with la fleur de lys…

like an arcane shared by a friend

who said to follow water trails

like a pirate in search of chest, as magnet speaks closer to sand…

He said many have found treasures under the sheet of their own graves.

Yet I favour its peaceful clay to dye denim & origin,

as I connect with those who fell for their flower & sleep inside

this bay of mud.

Today hooves flirt in Fundy sun,

safe & watchful over my eyes

and I wonder if that story was ever passed to their offsprings,

since man conquers on a saddle.

Come walk with me, sense a presence, their memory

dancing with tides, like a final oratory

along red cliffs & grassy shores.

Let me retreat from time & fog, as I fear ghosts & bellwalkers,

they swear the land still smells powder.


The original appeared in ‘bellwalker’ and was revamped in 2009

for the purpose of her new book titled – ‘from shore to shoormal’.


Judges Comment: To me this was the outstanding submission to the contest. The highest compliment I can pay it is "Purdyesque"! I felt engaged in the poet's ramble among relics on a battlefield from Canada's past. The language is casual but poetic - the poet isn't "trying too hard" to impress - & ironically this makes their observations stronger & more believable. The casual self-deprecation of the short final stanza - "I fear the ghosts may not like my curious nature" - added a welcome humorous touch to this stroll on the old Canadian battlefield. EXCELLENT!

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